Wrath of the Never Queen by Storm Lomax


Wrath of the Never Queen by Storm Lomax
Publisher: Self-published
Genre: Historical, LGBTQ, Paranormal, Romance, Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Young Adult
Rating: 3 stars
Reviewed by Lilikoi

A doomed prince with a monstrous curse. A sadistic king with a dark history. And the witch who will be his reckoning.

Gifted witch Shivani has so far avoided the annual Summoning. In her village, women are sent to the King each year and given six months to win the Prince’s heart and break his beastly curse. Anyone who can do so will be named Queen.

No one has succeeded.

Deep in debt and with the promise of a handsome reward, Shivani’s father volunteers her for the Summoning. With her magic stripped, Shivani is taken to the castle and thrust into the deadly challenge against her will.

As she navigates the prince’s terrifying curse and the king’s sadistic whims, she discovers decades-old secrets that could mean her freedom. But leaving wouldn’t save the prince and it wouldn’t free the imprisoned servants. Or Shivani could stay – if she’s shrewd enough to decipher the curse before the executioner’s axe drops.

As in the classic tale of Beauty and the Beast, the prince introduces Shivani—an avid reader like Belle– to his immense library. But in a unique twist of the familiar plot, the two main characters scour ancient manuscripts written in “witchtongue” and dragon language, searching for the elusive spell that will break the curse. With intriguing secondary characters and enthralling elements of fantasy, Wrath of the Never Queen is enjoyable and engaging.

I loved the paranormal aspect of this unique version of the beloved fairy tale: the telltale purple light and salty scent of witch magic, the discovery of ancient dragon lore and mystical enchantments, and the thrilling tension of ever-present danger as the story unfolds.

The main characters are compelling and likeable. With her noble, courageous heart, Shivani chooses to remain rather than flee when she finds a hidden passage leading out of the castle. Although she could escape and save her own life, she refuses to abandon the prince and the castle servants who have become her loyal friends. Prince Theo, despite his fearsome outward appearance as the beast, is tender, considerate, and caring. Aunt Meena, Vanya, and Inez enhance the complexity of the intriguing plot.

Despite the appealing elements of fantasy in this novel, there were many inconsistencies in the characters’ actions and language which were implausible and jarring, given the story’s antique medieval setting. Although the main characters engage in formal conversation, polite mannerisms, and eloquent forms of address reserved for royalty, Shivani uses modern obscenities which are culturally inappropriate and offensive within the context of such extremely proper etiquette. The budding romance between Shivani and the prince is depicted as innocent and chaste throughout the work, but one sexually explicit scene stands in stark contrast to the rest of the young adult novel.

With a bit more editing, this novel could really shine to its fullest. Also, rather than its abrupt conclusion with an appendix–the sapphic romance of the siren and the witch, a tale Shivani enjoyed hearing as a child—the ending would have been much more rewarding if that legend had been woven into the novel, explaining the ancient dragon culture associated with the castle and the iconic statue Shivani discovered in her quest to cure the curse.

In spite of its faults, Wrath of the Never Queen is an entertaining fantasy adaptation of the famed fairy tale, Beauty and the Beast.

Loving Lizzie Finn by Tamara Hughes


Loving Lizzie Finn by Tamara Hughes
Publisher: Self-published
Genre: Historical, Romance, Suspense/Mystery/Thriller
Rating: 3 stars
Reviewed by Lilikoi

Lizzie Finn grew up in a brothel, and she’s reminded of that fact every day. She dreams of finding a job and becoming independent. Only then can she be free of her aunt’s disdain. First, she must find an employer who won’t turn her away because of her past.

Byron Greeley is determined to save his family’s business after Lizzie’s uncle falsifies the amount Byron owes on a loan from the bank. Determined to find proof of Teague’s perfidy, Byron slips into the banker’s house and rummages through the study only to be discovered by Lizzie, a red-haired beauty who utterly captivates him.

Byron offers Lizzie a job in exchange for information about her uncle, and because she believes her uncle is innocent, she agrees. When Teague discovers Lizzie and Byron’s growing affection, he threatens to destroy Byron and his family, insisting Byron is exploiting her. Is Teague’s warning well-founded? Are Byron’s feelings for Lizzie true, or is Byron using her for his own gain?

Loving Lizzie Finn is a charming historical romance with engaging characters, a hint of spice, and an intriguing, well-developed plot.

Lizzie Finn is an indomitable young woman who was raised in a brothel until her mother’s tragic death, when she subsequently became the ward of her uncle Eldon Teague, a prosperous businessman and bank president in Boston. Within the affluent home of her new guardians, Lizzie is subjected to harsh ridicule and shame by her maternal aunt Margaret, who constantly reminds her that she is the daughter of a prostitute with little chance of overcoming her scandalous past. Although her uncle Eldon is much kinder, Lizzie cannot wait to escape her aunt’s vindictive cruelty by finding employment and becoming self-sufficient.

Byron Greeley—a young businessman who has inherited his ill father’s textile factory—is juggling the responsibilities of supporting his parents while keeping the floundering company afloat. He discovers that the amount of the loan negotiated between his father and the bank president has inexplicably doubled, but with the original documents having mysteriously disappeared, he has no proof to confirm his suspicions that Eldon Teague has fraudulently tampered with the terms. When he breaks into Teague’s house in the middle of the night to look for evidence, he is caught by Lizzie, a fiery redhead who not only captures his heart, but provides the means for him to obtain the proof he seeks. In exchange for her cooperation in obtaining the original documents, he offers Lizzie a job, providing them both the means to accomplish their separate yet entwined goals.

The characters are compelling and likeable. Lizzie is brave, stubborn, and independent, hardened by the cruelty she has endured. Having witnessed the abuse of women in the brothel where she was raised, she has learned self-reliance and developed a fierce need for independence. Although she has vowed to never marry, Lizzie’s undeniable attraction to Byron makes her question her convictions. Byron’s noble heart and commitment to both his family and to Lizzie make him an endearing character, yet his involvement in criminal activities keeps the reader—and Lizzie—unsure of his true intentions. Aunt Margaret is a bitter, resentful, and angry woman who is easy to hate, yet as the story progresses and secrets are revealed, much more easily understood.

Although I did enjoy much of the novel, I found it lacked the descriptive details necessary to evoke the historical background setting of nineteenth century Boston. Lizzie’s freedom to come and go as she pleases without an escort or chaperone—even to the point of sneaking out of the house in the middle of the night for a clandestine meeting at a warehouse— are not only implausible, but inconsistent with the societal norms of the era. And while Aunt Margaret is credibly portrayed as an active member of the Society for Moral Reform against prostitution, it seems highly unlikely that the aristocratic wife of a prestigious bank president would publicly malign her niece by spreading salacious gossip about Lizzie’s prostitute mother—Margaret’s own sister— for fear of tarnishing her prominent husband’s professional reputation.

When Lizzie and Byron finally overcome numerous obstacles to arrive at the anticipated happy ending, truths come to light through a most unexpected source of revelation and satisfying redemption.

Despite the insufficient historical background and the inconsistencies with societal norms for young women, Loving Lizzie Finn is nevertheless an entertaining romance with appealing characters and an absorbing, enticing plot.